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Playing With the Universe by ~deadlymushrooms:icondeadlymushrooms:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


this feeling of power
is insatiable
I'm moving
stars and moons
winding things
to my will
forcing objects
to work
in MY way
causing destruction
while preaching rebuilding

I'm scattering the heavens
and playing with the universe
©2005-2009 ~deadlymushrooms
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Author's Comments

ok, actually this poem is based on a toy. It was one of those sets of magnetic stars and moons and magnetic base. that's where the lines "i'm moving stars and moons" comes from, which was the start of this whole poem

i find it ironic really

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~Sameeh Jun 16, 2005, 9:07:40 AM
Interesting stuff! Good job.

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So long live the car crash hearts cry on the couch all the poets come to life fix me in 45
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~elvenartgirl Jun 18, 2005, 6:49:18 AM
:hug: You did great on this one, snuffy bottom. :D

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I hate everything about you. Why do I love you?
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~deadlymushrooms Jun 23, 2005, 6:31:26 AM
umm, snuffy bottom? where did that one come from? glad you liked it, tho

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99 times out of 10, somebody wins in the game of football-- Paul Burwell
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~elvenartgirl Jun 24, 2005, 6:38:38 PM
I've called you that in Driver's Ed.

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I hate everything about you. Why do I love you?
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~deadlymushrooms Jul 5, 2005, 10:32:17 AM
you did? i don't recall, i believe that's called selective memory, oh well

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99 times out of 10, somebody wins in the game of football-- Paul Burwell
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