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Waiting To Smile by ~deadlymushrooms:icondeadlymushrooms:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


happiness is contagious
but sometimes hard to show

scared to dare
to make that move
aching to show you
how I feel

but no one can
all on their own
I'm waiting to know I can
waiting to know
that it's okay
to know that no one cares

I'm waiting to smile
but you go first
©2005-2009 ~deadlymushrooms
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this is basically about not wanting to do something until someone else does it first, namely, smiling

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~Sameeh Jun 16, 2005, 7:25:43 AM
good stuff. well done =D

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So long live the car crash hearts cry on the couch all the poets come to life fix me in 45
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~deadlymushrooms Jun 16, 2005, 8:31:30 AM
thanx a lot :) I'm proud of that one, I rarely write stuff that I actually like, and even rarer is when I like something, and others do too, so I'm really glad you like it

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99 times out of 10, somebody wins in the game of football-- Paul Burwell
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~Sameeh Jun 16, 2005, 8:35:21 AM
=D keep it up, the more you like your work the more other people will =)

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So long live the car crash hearts cry on the couch all the poets come to life fix me in 45
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~elvenartgirl Jun 18, 2005, 6:53:56 AM
I hope you didn't write this about yourself or me or laura.......WOP.

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I hate everything about you. Why do I love you?
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~deadlymushrooms Jun 23, 2005, 6:17:02 AM
umm...no? I really don't know what you mean by that. I shall ignore it :)

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99 times out of 10, somebody wins in the game of football-- Paul Burwell
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~deadlymushrooms Jun 23, 2005, 6:17:38 AM
grrr, I keep forgetting to click reply

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99 times out of 10, somebody wins in the game of football-- Paul Burwell
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